It fell flat.
Apparently this is a short story that is part of a larger series...If so, dear god I am avoiding it.
I get that the characters aren't supposed to feel like humans, I get that it is a short story...but it was bland and boring.
After the lead up you would think you would at least get to see the big bang in the end but...nope...it's the end...
Nah, doesn't appear to be a series for me...I like the "big bang" in my stories.
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