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Elly Helcl

21% and I am ready to throttle the author...

My Most Precious One - Evangelene

 I am sorry but....

 

You don't "message your clitoris" and you certainly don't "massaging him cock".

 

A basic beta reader should have caught these mistakes. Hell, a BAD beta should have caught these!!!

 

So far I am thinking this author either needs to invest in an editor or she needs to just stop writing.

 

Harsh words I know...but I am so sick and tired of reading this trash!!! If you want a glowing review, invest in your work and for gods sake at least pretend to take pride in it.