I am sorry but....
You don't "message your clitoris" and you certainly don't "massaging him cock".
A basic beta reader should have caught these mistakes. Hell, a BAD beta should have caught these!!!
So far I am thinking this author either needs to invest in an editor or she needs to just stop writing.
Harsh words I know...but I am so sick and tired of reading this trash!!! If you want a glowing review, invest in your work and for gods sake at least pretend to take pride in it.