ARGH!!!!!!!!!! What is it with these authors!!!!!
Excuse me miss...it's a short for people who don't have time...When I don't have time to sit down and read an entire novel, I use something that I don't think you have heard of...it's called a bookmark.
You are selling a story, that is about 10 pages long once you remove the double spacing, for 2.99. The last 17% of your book is nothing more than ads for the "rest of the series", other books, and about the author.
This is NOT a book!!! It is a basic outline for a story that you scratched out while you were bored at the bar one night. If you aren't willing to write the story, please don't try to sell it. This is insulting.