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Elly Helcl

All Hands Below - Lelani Black I am not a big fan of authors jumping POV's. The author did this frequently throughout the book. The worst though was during the sex scenes. You would read about the character climaxing and then read it again from the other person's POV. It was...strange.

Not great but not terrible either. The book was way too predictable but I guess you have to expect that out of a short erotic story.