I do beta reading for Roxanne and I have been her friend for the last 16 years. If her writing sucked, I would tell her and it would be included in my review.
This is not my favorite of Roxie's work...Not that it is my least favorite either...I am just personally not a big fan of women who have been enslaved...that this one does so willingly is a mute point.
However, the fact that she is a sex slave and oh so willing? It is a really interesting short read.