Nope, I tried, I really tried. I just couldn't get into this book. I got about 50% of the way through before I just gave up.
The writing is stilted and it starts out with this really long inner monologue (?) of some scientist dude. To be honest, even that guy wasn't well written.
There aren't a whole lot of grammar or punctuation issues that I saw, but the writing itself. The author seems to struggle with writing this story.
I have no interest in finishing this series. I would encourage the author to take a second look at this series and see how he can smooth it out. As a reader I just COULDN'T get myself into the zone because of the stilted writing.